Time to go to the park sweetie. Said mum.
Urg do I have to? Said Lucy.
Yes.said mum.
Why? Said Lucy.
Because you have to. You have no choice. Said mum.
Fine. Said Lucy
Finally we are here. look Lucy there is a mam but looks like a statue.come see said mum. Wow it is around so many pretty flowers it is so cool said Lucy. Can we go home now I have seen the statue I have seen every thing so please can we go home NOWWWW!!. Fine if it really means that much to . Thank you I can get out of this place.
Hi Emi, This is a really good story. I like the bit when Lucy said so please can we go home NOWWWWWWWWW.
Good job!
Poor Lucy. I can sense her impatience as she is taken to somewhere she doesn’t really want to be.
Emily, do you think that if there is a question in your dialogue, it should be followed by ‘asked’ rather than said’?
Keep up the good work.
Jackie (Team 100WC)
New Zealand